DC Sample Script TT Page 2

So here is the second page of the DC sample script, actually I chance this page allot, but I still like's it, I hope you people like this page, this is the second page if you like this page let me know whit comments and/or fav's , or if you had something bad to say, just say it please,
this the page of my agent company
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this is the link to page one
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comments and critics are always welcome.